As years pass by, I wonder if would ever see anyone to whom I said goodbye, All my friends from my childhood, And the people who lived in my neighborhood.
The teachers who taught me the right from wrong, My first crush with whom I never got along, The people who encouraged me to dance and paint, The grandma next door who told the story of a saint.
As years pass by, I wonder to how many people I have said goodbye, The people who once I thought that I could not live without, Now, sometimes I think what was that about?
As years pass by, I wonder how fast the time flies by, If I could ever walk back my life, I would never miss a chance to say a proper goodbye even though we had a strife. -JMJ
You have a knack of hitting the right emotions with your words. This piece reminded me of a lot of things from my childhood, actually everything you talk about here seems so relatable. I love the way you write, the smooth flow, the rhyme, it seems like a perfect song. Loved this!
Beautifully expressed and the image goes so well with the poem. A ‘proper goodbye’ is haunting. We rarely think of our meeting with someone may be the final meeting. It’s a good reflection to keep each moment precious. Thank you for the post!
Proper goodbyes are so important, and we often regret how should have down more … your poem touched me deeply Joyce ..
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Absolutely! I’m really glad to hear that. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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My pleasure Joyce
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Beautiful!
Thank you.
Joanna
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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This was a marvellous piece joanna. A proper goodbye is indeed very important π
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Yes, indeed! Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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Beautiful as always dear Joyce.. Rhyming is spot on! πππ Thanks for sharing
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You are too kind. Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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This brings back my thoughts as well.
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I hope all the positive ones. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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So true!
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. Much appreciated.
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Very nice!
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Thank you so much.π
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Wowww!! The rhyming was fantastic dear Joyce..! Awesome..! Very wonderfully written dear..!πβ¨
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Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.ππ
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A lovely reflection, Joyce.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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Youβre most welcome, Joyce. Always.
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time really flies away dropping off lessons and memories!β€π€β€π€
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Oh yes, it does! Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. Much appreciated.
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A beautiful and touching piece, Joyce.
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Thank you for visiting my blog and sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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Most welcome.
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Very true, very beautiful sentiment.
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Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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My pleasure.
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You have a knack of hitting the right emotions with your words. This piece reminded me of a lot of things from my childhood, actually everything you talk about here seems so relatable. I love the way you write, the smooth flow, the rhyme, it seems like a perfect song. Loved this!
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I’m really glad that you could relate to it. I’m humbled by your kind words. Thank you so much.
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Beautifully expressed and the image goes so well with the poem. A ‘proper goodbye’ is haunting. We rarely think of our meeting with someone may be the final meeting. It’s a good reflection to keep each moment precious. Thank you for the post!
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Thank you so much for visiting my blog and sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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