
A moment of perfection,
It was when I saw you giving instruction,
To someone who was in need,
I thought you did a good deed.
A moment of love and affection,
In those eyes I saw a beautiful connection,
Where I could see my whole life,
I knew that soul from other life.
A moment of euphoric sensation,
When you took the chance to ask me a question,
It felt like I was floating in the space,
And then I fell flat on my face.
-JMJ
Oh wowww!! Dear Joyce, this is a masterpiece..! I truly loved it..! And the RHYMING was fantastic dear..! I love rhyming poems very much..! But, how you write poems in rhyming?😉🤔 It is little difficult to me to write rhyming poems..!😃
And you’re fantastic dear..! Very wonderfully penned rhyming queen..! Thanks a lot for sharing such a sweet poem..! Have a beautiful day my dear..!🤗🤗🤗💕✨✨
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Thank you so much dear. I’m really humbled by your comments. It feels so wonderful to read each and every word of yours. You are really kind. Have a good day. 😊🤗
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Awww!! How sweet you’re!! you’re very welcome dear..! It’s my pleasure..! Have a beautiful day..!🤗😊
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it would be beautiful if not for the ending! Please, could we be happy? It might be realistic but it isn’t what dreams are made of
Thank you.
Joanna.
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I don’t intend to write that way Joanna. Sometimes, when I sit to write something it automatically flows like this. I know everyone wants to be optimistic and happy in this difficult times. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.😊
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