She can see herself on the ground, Cold and stiff with no earthly bound, Free from all the life's strife, And all the words of the world acting like a knife. People came to pay her last respect, Standing in between them she did expect, A little love that she always longed for, Was that too much to ask for?
She could hear that they were saying prayers, Judging about her destination in their heart with fake tears, As she could now understand them inside out, Stop! That's all she wanted to shout. Instead she looked once more on the body and smiled, Then walked away leaving everything behind. -JMJ
I have always thought about the idea.. what if souls are standing right next to us and listening to what we are saying. I know it’s creepy. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
It would help if we know how people are really from inside before we leave permanently, wouldn’t it? That’s you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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Nice idea knowing what people say after you die… just walk away..!!
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I have always thought about the idea.. what if souls are standing right next to us and listening to what we are saying. I know it’s creepy. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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What happens after death is such a mystery. I am glad that she was able to walk away!
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A mystery everyone wants to know about. I’m glad that she found her peace. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. Much appreciated.
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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Good one dear. Unique and thoughtful. ❤️❤️👏👏
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate it.😊🙏
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This would be me when I am gone ..Walk away
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Yeah… Walk away. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. Much appreciated.
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This is such a sad poem Joyce! Beautifully written. Loved the idea!
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Thank you so much. I’m glad that you liked it.
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Welcome 🙂
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This is touching and sad piece dear Joyce..!🤗❣️
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Life and death! Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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You’re very welcome dear..!
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😊🙏
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Beautifully crafted poem
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Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated.
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This is exactly how I imagine death to be…to be aware of what happened before walking away 🙂 Beautifully expressed!!!
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It would help if we know how people are really from inside before we leave permanently, wouldn’t it? That’s you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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Yeah…before knowing the mystery pf death…if mystery of life is unfold😅
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LoL… Yeah! No wonder people claim to see ghosts. Too many lies in the world.
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Hehe…true 😄
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