
Walking on the beach and letting the sunlight touch my skin,
I allowed sand and water to be my kin,
While listening to the waves and watching the birds sing,
Tears rolled down as it made my heart swing.
Thinking only about all the disappointments and downs in my life,
I wasn't being grateful to the God who gave me the life.
Then I saw a young girl selling roasted peanuts,
With dirty hands, torn clothes but she was no nuts,
Even after a dreadful long day she had her hopes high,
With love in her eyes, she walked gracefully without giving a sigh.
When she offered me her peanuts seeing me cry,
I could only stare at her and couldn't ask why,
The beach was a place where I could find my final peace,
Instead I found God in her face and I walked back in grace in one piece.
-JMJ
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Love this..thanks
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You are suclh senitive soul, but you seem needing healing. I love the poerm I hope nsture can help you.to feel happy and free.
Joanna
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Thank you for your kind words Joanna and yes… You are right, I do need some healing. Thank you again for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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There is so much that we take for granted. We yearn for more, disregarding the things we already have.
Instead I found God in her face and I walked back in grace in one piece
Beautifully written, Joyce π
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You are absolutely right, Shweta. Life changes when we start to see things in a different perspective. Thank you so much for your kind words. Much appreciated. π
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Indeed. You’re very welcome π
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Wowww..! It’s really marvelous dear Joyce..! Excellent write..! Loved it very much..! The rhyming was fantastic..!π€
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Thank you so much dear. I’m really glad that you loved it. Much appreciated.π€
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You’re very welcome Joyce..! It’s my pleasure
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Beautiful write dear Joyce. And the ending is amazingly beautiful. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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So beautifully penned ππ
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Thank you for visiting my blog and sharing your thoughts here.π
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so beautifulπ
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Thank you Cindy for your kind words. I really appreciate it.π
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I agree with Cindy, soooo beautiful, beautiful. β€οΈ
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Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated.π
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You’re most welcome, my friend. Always. π
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Really loved the poem!
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Thank you Pooja for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much.
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You are welcome.
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Such a profound post.
Well written π
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Thank you for visiting my blog and sharing your thoughts here. Much appreciated.
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Beautiful and touching
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Much appreciated.
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Amazing. The girl has a ray of hope despite our problem but we do seek for problems without actually having it. I loved reading it. If you have time please visit my blogs alsoπππ
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Thank you for reading your blog and sharing your thoughts here.
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Loved this. Excellent rhyming
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Thank you for visiting my blog and sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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Most welcome
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