
I found myself in a lovely place,
Where a gentle breeze touched my face,
Where the mountains stood with their heads high,
And where the birds flew freely in the sky.
The river was so pure that it mirrored my face,
The grasses were so soft which reminded me to offer my prayers,
Where the sun enjoyed playing hide and seek with the clouds,
And the trees danced slowly in the wind singing their songs aloud.
Then I saw a familiar face which I love dearly,
Those eyes were speaking to me and all I wanted was a hug so tightly,
That we could breath out all our air to the atmosphere,
And release our spirits into that place that we really care.
-JMJ
Please leave your comments on the post as I would really love to read them.
This great place does sound a lot like heaven! So beautifully written π€π
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Oh yes… It does. Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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My pleasure π
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Wish to live in that intoxicating feeling of love forever.
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Love is a feeling that can both heal us or destroy us but no one can deny it’s power. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. Much appreciated.
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I find a lovely place when I click on your posts.
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I’m glad that you found the place lovely. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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So serene (I especially the river/mirror line).
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Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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Beautiful write.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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Welcome
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Your poems a breath of fresh air
One feels them!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m humbled.
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