
We were in love when the fate decided to separate us,
Holding on end of the rope from top of the mountain,
You told me that you would never let me go,
But, when I decided to let go of myself from your life,
I just was making sure you to be safe and happy even without me in it,
But, I promised that I will be waiting for you in the next.
While falling I asked you to run as soldiers were marching towards you,
I saw you were dragged out of my sight as I was slowly closing my eyes.
I have been waiting one life after another as I promised,
Searching for you, I knew that I will recognize you,
As our souls knew each other long before that these generations could even think,
When we finally met, you had no memory of the past,
You thought that it was just another thing and could make some time pass,
May be I will have to wait hundreds of years to see the whole you again,
When you will remember the end of the rope and the hope in my eyes,
Or may be you will just listen to your soul this time.
-JMJ
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Wonderful imagery
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Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated.
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Heartbreakingly beautiful. I hope that the wait won’t be too long now!
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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😊🙏
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These are soothing words
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I’m glad that you found them soothing. I’m humbled.
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Heart aches reading this, hope you are okay and things work out soon
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I’m fine, thank you. I really appreciate your concern and thank you for sharing your thoughts here.
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This is lovely imagery. ❤️❤️ Creative though 👏👏👏
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I don’t know why but the images were in my mind… thank you for sharing your thoughts and for showing your support always. I really appreciate it.
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Moving piece. At a soul level, it feels as if we yearn for that one that completes us.
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here. I’m glad that you felt that way by reading this post.
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My pleasure!
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😊🙏
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Separation is hard, especially when one can’t decide which way to choose.
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Yes… It can be especially when one person knows everything and other one is unaware of anything. Life and it’s complexities!
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Amazing!!
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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Amazing mam
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Thank you so much. Much appreciated.
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So beautiful imagery..!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. 😊
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You’re very welcome..!
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😊🙏
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So emotion evoking- beautiful poem.
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Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated.
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Your poems have a beautiful haunting quality about them..they touch the heart
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I’m glad you feel like that about my poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I really appreciate it.
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