
A treasure is lost somewhere in deep.
Something so valuable that one needs to keep.
A treasure is stolen by a wicked witch.
How hard have I tried to keep it safe from the breech?
A treasure I had to give up because of the sinister disease.
Can it be a reason for me to cease?
A treasure was taken from me by the people around.
Shall I hide myself when they surround?
A treasure was vanished behind my wrinkled face.
As old I get, should I be in the loneliest place?
At last, I found out how silly I was,
To think even that the treasure was,
Taken by someone or something from outside,
As I found that the treasure was all along inside.
I started to give a smile to the mirror,
First thing in the morning when no one was nearer,
And when I stepped out of the house, I gave a smile to a crying child,
Then it occurred to me that this treasure can be shared to someone in need.
It made my day as it felt like a bliss,
The lost treasure was found on my lips.
-JMJ
Please leave your comments on the post as I would really love to read them.
Keep smiling Mary π
I never leave my bed in the morning without smiling to myself π
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I did the same mistake with the comments again. The comment below is also for you. Thank you, again.
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That’s a very positive way of starting a day. Thank you for visiting my blog and sharing your thoughts here. Yes, I will keep smiling.
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Wow, what a beautiful poem. I loved every single line here. Rhyming goes through the flow very well. Amazing poem dear Joyce β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ
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Thank you so much for your kind words. It really means a lot to me and I’m glad that you liked it. ππ
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It looks like you are preaching here to the converted. I never get up unhappy, angry, or hormonally challenged like those who say “don’t talk to me in the morning or I will bite your head off!”
At least the little group of us here can keep on smiling.
Thank you.
Joanna
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I was not trying to preach here but to say something which I felt about. Some days can get really rough and it can be difficult for us to even smile. I’m happy to here that you start your day with so much positivity. Keep smiling.π
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The term “preaching to the converted” is not literally meaning that, but rather saying something we all know and agree on.
You made a valid and necessary point, it is just a shame the audience was so small.
Joanna
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Much appreciated.
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You are welcome. I like your thoughts.
Joanna
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What a lovely poem! πππ
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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My pleasure πππ
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A smile always helps. It’s a tonic for the soul, adornment for the face, and spreader of cheer. Nice poem..
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I’m really glad that you liked it. Yes… A smile can make a big difference.
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Joyce, you are a beautiful soul. Your thoughts are full of positivity. Let your treasure grow day in and day out.
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Thank you so much. I’m humbled.π
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Fantastic poem Mary!!
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I’m really glad that you liked it. Thank you so much.βΊοΈ
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Most welcome Mary..
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Nicely penned with deep meaning buddy π―ππ
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate it and thank you for visiting my blog too.
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Stay safe and stay healthy ππ
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You too and thank you again ππ
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You had my attention from the start as soon as you said βA treasure lost somewhere in deepβ….such a profound statement and I can see why you love this poem. Thank you for sharing
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Thank you so much for visiting my blog and sharing your thoughts here. That’s so kind of you.
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Really enjoyed the uplifting poem.
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I’m really glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here.
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Wonderful words with deep meaning π
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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